Manga Angel Spirit

again, i likies much. tis a verrry gurrrrd story, lots of attitude and originality in it. Keep going, Ethannnnnn

hehe, i liiiikkkiiieeeeessssss not really that much into star wars, but tis intrigueinnggg :) keep it uppp Lurve Ethan

hehe, tis cool. is the second chapter on? Ethan

yeh, thankies =P I shall read some of yours now I think i might write some more stuff Ethan

hehe, thankies, yeh this if the second draft, the first i posted on poetshaven in the Straight Jacket Romance trio Vol1, it was the best there =D Ethan

in the film, a spartan answer's is a roar and when they strike their weapons against their shield, and i tried to make things sound more spontanious and make the ...

thankies, ill use that =) with the 'pass the point of now retur' thats when a helicopter or plance cant turn back to its original take off place, saying that ...

loved it! t'was sad though..... i loved the story line, reminded me a bit of Eragon, but with some twists. The mud fight was cute, very original and fun. keep ...

i dont see where it said 'slip ones neck between an executioners block', i see the fac that executioners have axes or a sharp instrument, and that you have to ...

the title is changed XD thankies author 13 =) hopefully thatll not put so many people off XD EsKiMo EtHaN

oooooooh, thankies. =D im gnna add some question marks to it, that should, make it better thanks everyoneXD EsKiMo EtHaN

Thanks for the suggestons! :D